George Washington, was simply one of the greatest founders of the world. He got the colonists to work together together and formed one of the proudest nations ever. If I where to meet George Washington I would thank him for everything he has done to us.
When most people think of George Washington they think he's just the 1st President of the United States. When I think about him I think of one of the many soldiers and leaders who gave us our freedom. He fought for us as the first President, as well as a Commander in the American revolution. He fought in the war from 1775-1783 in which he fought in countless battles.
Although fighting for us was important making laws was just as important, in 1787 George Washington was one of many significant people to sign the Constitution. Two years later in 1789 he became the first president of The United States of America. Once he became president he fought Europe just for our freedom.
George Washington was by far one of the greatest men to help form the society as we know it If we didn't have George Washington we might be slaves under the British rule. Just think George Washington is only one of the many founding Fathers.
Collin you need a stronger thesis statement and you start talking about information too early in the essay. (Introduction)
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